posted by [identity profile] moonchildfic.livejournal.com at 09:41pm on 24/05/2011
This is beautiful. It reads almost like a song if that makes any sense. There's depth in there and different perspectives and how blindsided Damien was by the betrayal but at the same time there's hints of the reasons why that can be understood even without the context of Eliot. Really good job.

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